When i saw her
That's not my eyes which saw her
That's my heart which saw her.
Storm arose in my heart
Rain fall down on my head
Wind kissed softly to my hand.
Birds tweeted in the sky
Flowers danced with butterfly
Land shook, don't know why?
This is love not attraction
This is sacred emotion
This is heart's representation.
This is love at first sight
Whoever loved that loved not at first sight?
you, my dear poet you create good images in you poem which required most in certain kind of poems, where you succeeds very beautifully. cheers.
wow, what a nice, sweet poem))))))) I like it)))) hope you`ll read some of mine))))
hey really a great poem.....you expressed your feelings very well....nice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow when i read this then i agree that this is not just an attraction but a real love.. Very beautiful my friend, thanks for inviting keep writing more from heart like this_Unwritten Soul