Sagar Shelar

Rookie - 2 Points (06/14/1991 / Nasik, India.)

Smile On A Beggar's Face - Poem by Sagar Shelar

He lived on other's mercy
If got something became crazy.
Opened Sky was his shelter
On burning earth slept better.
No shame in his eyes
He knew only to rise.
He was millionaire
Without single dollar.
He spoke with Angel
He saw life's true angle.
He proud to be a beggar
He smiled when looked in life's mirror.
We have everything but always cry for something
He had nothing but always smiled for everything.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

=

Comments about Smile On A Beggar's Face by Sagar Shelar

  • X X Uniccjonr X X (9/14/2012 5:36:00 AM)


    ahh, that me. Thanks. I loved it (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (9/9/2012 2:05:00 PM)


    very wonderful poem! i really love it....
    We have everything but always cry for something
    He had nothing but always smiled for everything.
    THE DEEPEST WISDOM OF OUR LIFE! ! ! ! ! Bravo!
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/6/2012 11:17:00 AM)


    We have everything but always cry for something
    He had nothing but always smiled for everything.

    Grattitude means much. Regardless the circumstance, he who has a grateful heart can soar above the circumstance. Enjoyed this delightful reading.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sanjay Mehta (9/6/2012 12:12:00 AM)


    Dear Sagar, your anatomy of beggar is summed up in the last two lines 'We have everything but always cry for something He had nothing but always smiled for everything'. The 'I' in us is the root cause of all our worries. As far as the beggar is concerned the said I is missing, but I have a point to make that we should have balance of all forces, imagine life with missing 'I it will be dull and boring, rather it will be squalid. Dear poet check out for spelling of begger, it should be beggar. Thanks for sharing. I invite you to share your views on my poem 'Beggar (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (9/5/2012 11:44:00 PM)


    Wow! pretty good.Yes, If we have nothing, we don't need to cry, worry, be angry and so on.I like this.Thanks for sharing this. (Report) Reply

  • Derek Haughton (9/5/2012 1:22:00 PM)


    Spent a while on crit. of your poem only to be told 'Wrong verification code. try again.' Thus the comment is lost. i have no time to repeat, so will leave it for now. Will it work this time? (Report) Reply

  • Alexandria Angel (9/5/2012 10:23:00 AM)


    I love it. Yet I like all poetry but I have to admitt I like this one best (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (9/5/2012 10:10:00 AM)


    Good philosophical poem. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/5/2012 6:57:00 AM)


    Good poem, it shows that we should be happy because of the things that we have and even for the things that we don't have. it's important to live like a real human and give thank to God because of everything.
    Well written.keep your pen rolling.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sunny Rose (9/5/2012 6:53:00 AM)


    that's a nice and deeply thought out poem i salute your talent and please do check out my poems (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/5/2012 5:49:00 AM)


    I wish for the beggar, it so nice you behaving so nicely, you did good thing, smiles....but i wish if you can do more than begging it will be better, i know its hard to get job but when you try to work you will able to give more smile, maybe with the little earnings you can give to other people who have the same life as you was before....we will built them a big house for all, we will feed them with best foods but first you must work for that dream, and we will make then a new chance of life, when you starting yourself to help you then help others, we will love more people around the world equally_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

Read all 11 comments »




Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 6, 2012


[Report Error]