Friday, January 30, 2015

Love At First Sound Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love at first sound
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It was moonlit night
Not a soul was in sight
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rajesh Thankappan 05 February 2015

A very humorous and fruitful ending to an interesting tale Deepakji. Congratulation! All is well that ends well! 10/10

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 February 2015

Humorous write. This happened with me many times many years back, especially when mobile was not there. once, I felt the person was in a hurry as it was a std call some where from far and may be from PCO. your poem reminded me of long years back. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 31 January 2015

Did she at anytime realize that she was talking to a stranger? It seems, both of you enjoyed listening and talking to each other! Hilarious and beautiful write! Enjoyed this shipboard romance!

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