Love Being Loved Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love Being Loved

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I feel pity and shame
I think over it but pass no blame
It has some negative aspect
Yet it is possible act

Life seems hollow
That shall not allow
Any positive things to take place
As some ideas have crept in any case

Lot many things are said and not done
Golden days have completely gone
Ideals and principles have remained in golden books
I fail to understand and head shakes in disbelief

“To eat and feel merry” is the only purpose?
“Create good position and be happy” not enough I suppose
I regret no birth but certainly get dejection
I want people to offer some reaction

The desperation drives to corner
Some tragedy may take place sooner or later
I blame some condition responsible for suicide
Even though there may be some opinion to divide

I love being loved
If puzzle remains solved
I wish to live the way others live
And survive so long it makes me to believe

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2013

I feel pity and shame I think over it but pass no blame

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 November 2013

Re: Love being loved (Score: 1) by morgen90210 on Sunday, November 10,2013 (19: 04: 13) Wonderful sentiments a hopeful poem. would you like to join in my slams i would really like to see you there thanks

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Gajanan Mishra 09 November 2013

good write, I like it. Please read my poems..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2013

Deep Adrian NunezLess than a minute ago Thank you for sharing. I feel that alot Comment +1 Liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2013

Deep Adrian NunezLess than a minute ago Thank you for sharing. I feel that alot Comment +1 Liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2013

Victor GriffithLess than a minute ago Well asaid. Good ambition

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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