Paul Warren

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Love - Blanket On The Ground - Poem by Paul Warren

Let's lie on a blanket on the ground
Whilst the sun sinks slowly down
I whisper softly of my love for you
And make my promise to be true
In the distance the sea sparkles free
And know our love is meant to be.

© Paul Warren Poetry

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Prose Poem

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Lying with you love

Comments about Love - Blanket On The Ground by Paul Warren

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/3/2015 2:06:00 AM)

    very imaginative. Beautiful way to get away from the hub and save a moment of silence with your loved one. Loved it. (Report) Reply

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  • Tushar Ray (8/30/2015 12:20:00 AM)

    Wonderfully crispy expression of all-pervading blanketed love. Thanks for sharing - - 10ispy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2015

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