Love Comes Heating Poem by wabi sabi

Love Comes Heating



I'm in a space shooter

speeding up,
I'm sticking to the seat

my soul is coming off of my body,


Bahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....n
burning up redly to ash


stunningly short
what I am is spread into petals in Ultra-Violet,


quietly,

falling/rounding/blown away

transparently

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 08 November 2012

I kept my breathe and when I finished reading I was doing the whaaaaaa! ! ! Magnificent imagery, I really loved this, thank you for sharing it my friend!

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

So different yet so nice...styles are mixing but still sabee and it really wonderful thing to see how much you can diverse your art_Soul

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