Like A Big Tree Touching Me Poem by wabi sabi

Like A Big Tree Touching Me

Rating: 5.0


warm
not too chill
scary
but true

so I can trust myself again
whenever you just say you like what I do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Sinclair 18 June 2012

I love this... it is unusual but where the language is not always as expected it make the mind awaken and read...tyvm karen

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Kasia Fedyk 17 June 2012

Yes, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! ! Simple and wonderful!

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Ramesh Rai 06 June 2012

beautiful compose i like it short poem full expression 100% melody.

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Neela Nath Das 05 June 2012

You want to get the touch like tree which symbolizes shelter, safety and reliance.Nice write!

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Unwritten Soul 05 June 2012

If a big tree touching me i will run away coz hey it can moves.....is it a story in Alice in Wonderland hahahaha....ok stop joking now, i think your poem is good but can you add some relationship of the title to the content inside the poem...it will be greater...and anyway i love the spirit here...yes you must love what you do, this is you and be sure you enjoy every moment you doing now_Unwritten Soul

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