Thursday, September 4, 2008

Love Does The Most Craziest Things Comments

Rating: 4.0

love does the most craziest things
somedays your so happy and all u wanna do is sing,
but on the other hand love is like a bee and it leaves a sting.
somedays you get jealous and feel sad and blue,
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Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008

This is a poem with rhymes. Though one, I don't much care for. It is written with enthusiasm. I can just see her writing this as fast as she can. It is not a bad poem, so I gave it an 8 and a recommendation. But honestly, it could be done better. I think this poem will be visited again once or twice. GW62

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