Love Is A Rose Poem by Cheryl Griffith

Love Is A Rose

Rating: 2.5

Love is a Rose that blooms
With open arms she welcomes the sun
She arises with early beauty at the wake of dawn
She yawns, stretching her body young and free
The Sun smiling handsomely
As she glows in the heat of his passion
She sways with emotion
What rain is there to cool this heat
A passion so surging and sweet
With gently hands, he caresses her rosy cheeks
As he whispers softly in her ear
Their love open and bare
Each day she dances to the music
Blowing tranquil in the wind, enticing her lover
Each day eager to prove their love to each other
Their love glowing, growing, filling
Till one day she says goodbye
Even beautiful Roses die
So the sun at Eve restlessly sleeps
And mournfully, he weeps
Only to find at the break of dawn
A beautiful Rose in bloom
Stretching her body young and free
She yawns and soon,
She'll grow to know, to feel the passion, the heat
Willingly she gives her heart, her soul
A love that's pure and bold
Love is a rose, love is eternal

Tuesday, July 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
Roseann Shawiak 03 September 2014

Imagery is good in this poem. Rhythm has been thrown off by misspelled words and wrong tenses. Poem is disjointed somewhat because of it. Good thoughts and ideas though. I am partial to roses! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

..........truly a most beautiful poem....a rose is a special flower...and a perfect example, why we need to care for the earth....

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Cheryl Griffith

Cheryl Griffith

San Fernando Trinidad and Tobago
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