Friday, December 6, 2013

Love Is Just An Ache Comments

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Layin in a tangle of empty sheets
Sleepin with a dream that won't start
Someone keeps replaying everything you said
Love is just an ache in my heart
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Clara Keiper
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Roseann Shawiak 17 August 2015

Great little poem, says quite a lot in so few words! Thank you for sharing. (you can join the writer's union also, everything you write is automatically copyrighted! Check for one near you) . RoseAnn

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Khairul Ahsan 14 December 2014

So short, yet so touching! The words are so simple and beautiful that one can feel the ache. Well done!

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Gold Trybes 06 December 2013

Hold on dear..love is also patient, sweet and full of allure and freshness if only you live up to its billing ;) Smile dear

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Clara Keiper

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