Love Is Sure Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love Is Sure

Rating: 5.0


LOVE KNOWS NO BOUNDARY
BUT IS IT NECESSARY?
TO LOVE IT ON ONE SIDE AND PUZZLE ALSO BESIDE
THAT EXPOSES GAME

NO ONE IS TO BE BLAMED
LOVE IS BLIND
YET WE NEED TO TAKE CARE AND FIND OUT
IS IT, IN FACT, UNIAUE AND ESPECIALLY TO TALK ABOUT?

LOVE HAS ITS ROOTS
NO ONE IN AIR CAN SHOOT
AFFORDS LESS TIME TO ENJOY FRUIT
PROVIDED MALE AND FEMALE ADJUST AND SUIT

LOVE IS NO ACCOMODATION
NEITHER IT IS COMPROMISE NOR A SPECIAL RELATION
IT IS BOND AND THAT MUST EXIST FOREVER
TO BE SEEN IN PUBLIC AND WALKED TOGETEHR

IF BIRDS CAN SHOW IT WITH PLEASURE
WE HAVE IT IN OUR LIFE AS TREASURE
LOVE IS THE ONLY THING TO BE FOUND SO PURE
THAT LIFE RUNS SMOOTHLY THEREAFTER FOR SURE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bella 2012.06.30 21: 07 Love is an emotion that needs many variables to express. I do agree that love has no boundaries and is blind. I found a couple of typos, i.e., S4L4 Adjust / S5L1 Accommodation / S5L4 Together. I had to read it a couple of times to get the flow, it's a bit choppy to me, but the message of Love is there. Thanks for sharing. Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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