Love Nots Poem by michele kostelnik

Love Nots

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the strangeness of others even
your sisters and brothers
is a responsibility
to overcome-
or some night they will be
lying in bed dying.
how you loved them, its quality,
will be unknown to you
as your own mother was while
a living stranger.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fanniesson - 02 May 2007

I like this one it hits close to home for me might even say a little too close comes across as something that was hard to write

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Not Long Left 04 April 2006

I agree with Mr Hosein here, although the theme has been tried and tested, once this poem has been read a few times it is clear that is holds deeper more personal issues...... nice write Michelle. best wishes vincent

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K. Jared Hosein 21 March 2006

A piece about a similar theme but approaching from a different angle - which makes it a refreshing and deeper read than its peers. A nice job and an original read. - K.

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