michele kostelnik

Rookie (December 7,1944 / Norfolk)

Love Nots - Poem by michele kostelnik

the strangeness of others even
your sisters and brothers
is a responsibility
to overcome-
or some night they will be
lying in bed dying.
how you loved them, its quality,
will be unknown to you
as your own mother was while
a living stranger.


Comments about Love Nots by michele kostelnik

  • (5/2/2007 6:32:00 PM)


    I like this one it hits close to home for me
    might even say a little too close
    comes across as something that was hard to write
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  • (4/4/2006 1:56:00 AM)


    I agree with Mr Hosein here, although the theme has been tried and tested, once this poem has been read a few times it is clear that is holds deeper more personal issues...... nice write Michelle.

    best wishes

    vincent
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  • K. Jared Hosein (3/21/2006 10:31:00 PM)


    A piece about a similar theme but approaching from a different angle - which makes it a refreshing and deeper read than its peers. A nice job and an original read.

    - K.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 21, 2006



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