A poem is someone's soul on paper:
It emits a feeling,
Perhaps of great rage or warmth or sadness—
But the feeling, it is there.
But when I read a poem crafted so heartfelt;
From one ordinary person to another—
Though to someone they see as their Beloved;
Someone so divine in their eyes,
Everyone else holds but a candle
To the beauty of their One—
I feel nothing.
I feel lost to this poem;
I cannot find myself.
I feel but an empty, aching longing
For something unattainable; something I cannot reach.
These poems, they are always crafted so delicately
From someone's heart,
But I feel nothing when I read it. I always will.
"Love poems" I feel, as I messaged you last night, is your best poem to date, the most heart-felt poem of yours to date, ironically about not being able to feel love as an emotion. Well, what more can I say here?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poignant, but beautifully crafted. " Everyone else holds but a candle To the beauty of their One" nice. But you lament "I feel nothing… feel but an empty, aching longing" quite creative