Monday, May 17, 2010

Love Poetry - A Simple Kiss Comments

Rating: ★4.3

When i kissed her earlier, it felt nice,
I noticed she smelt faintly of spice,
As my mouth found her lips,
She held me tightly at the hips,
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Kieran J1996
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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ 14 June 2010

Simply sweet! lovely from start to finish! Loved It; D

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Silly Artist 07 June 2010

Its sweet and kind. But the last two verses makes it funny: P

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Krystyna Kerperien 25 May 2010

wow! i love it and dam you have really good poems!

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Crazy Vampire 18 May 2010

really good! it is so sweet! i love it! ^-^

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Emily Oldham 17 May 2010

sweet ode, truly the simplicity of love :)

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