Love Protest: Open Letter 1 Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

Love Protest: Open Letter 1

Rating: 5.0


Look what you have
You done with me!

You invaded my mind
You're all I can think of
The moment I try to let it go
The more thoughts of you arise

My reasoning
Ability is weakened
Tidal waves of emotions
Sweep away my logic
Leaving my desires for you
On their highest climax

Alas! Alas!
I cannot oversee
The yields of my actions
My mind can only
Process for here & now

Ah! Your sezzling body!
- - - - - - - - - -
Your presence set loose
My untamed being
Wild & uncontrollable
In indulge & in pleasure

Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: letter,loneliness,lonely,love,sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian 05 July 2018

Emotional lost are well expressed in this marvellous craft work...nice work Lungelo

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 05 July 2018

I appreciate your time in reading and laying such positive feedback

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 November 2017

Reminds me of the song TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN popularized by JOURNEY... a very nice write, Lungelo...10+++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 December 2017

Thanks Benard with your comments.

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