A Peach Tonight? Poem by Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

A Peach Tonight?

Rating: 5.0


I get home tired at midnight,
With a peach on my hands;
I throw a peach on my couch;

I sit on the couch;
As I undress its soft skin;
Write love poem on the couch.

Sunday, December 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,love,love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

This is a thought provoking and an amazing poem wisely penned.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2022

A short and sweet romantic poem....liked the idea.

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Hazel Durham 12 July 2018

Creative, romantic and beautifully written! Love the title too!

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 16 July 2018

I admire your positive feedback on my poetry.

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Lincoln 02 July 2018

Another beautifully articulated poem.., so lonely.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 04 July 2018

Thanks once again Lincoln for taking your time in reading my work. Much appreciate your feedback

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Brian 01 July 2018

Wonder poem, short yet contains wonderful metaphors.10++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 July 2018

Thanks Brian with your great insight on this poem

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Simon 04 December 2017

Wow! Nice poem.....much to analyse.....10++++

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Your feedback is very appreciated, Simon....Thanks

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