Saturday, December 21, 2013

Love’s Last Flickering Flame Comments

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Is there any soul radiating more
Than of a youthful love long holding hands,
Vibrant love if not hearts, on unknown shore
Of sea that’s life, in search of newer lands?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2019

A youthful love! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 August 2019

Yes, youthful V/s old love, thanks for the feedback dear EKL

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Akhtar Jawad 25 August 2019

A child’s love, as of youth, can often selfish be, Old love’s a river losing self, embracing sea. Beautiful lines of a lovely poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 August 2019

Thank you Akhtar saab for reading this old piece and liking it.

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