Like a quick-sand, she sank me in black and white...
Like violent tempest, she sealed my fate with a back-bite,
Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart....
Like an injured player, I am completely hurt;
Smash! Smash! Love is a trash!
Though I gave her, a red rose,
I rather became a blue-rose;
She is a twist in the tale of a horror flick!
My life became tamashah and I am sick,
I grow pale in the life of chapatti stale!
Life with her is thrill and drama accompanied by music!
Life without her is Titanic struggle and homesick;
Life with her is picturesque landscape and hello kin!
Life without her is Charles Moore's Plastic Ocean and dustbin;
Feel! Feel! No steel but she is my Achilles heel.
She switched on the sides and I'm done!
She is no honey bun but only a pun......
Sea of dullness clasped my heart and it swings!
She stripped my wings and it stings;
There hangs a tale with wide spread pall of gloom;
If I ponder over and linger on and brood over,
I am out of context and no doubt to the core all over,
Tsunami, natural calamity, Catastrophe, earth - quake
Are all small before my love lake and a headache,
Soon I am waiting to meet the doom!
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LOVE SHOCK: Bitten by the Bug of Love! (Part-1)
Another great poem, , I like some of the words, are really amazing.. You portraited about a bitten love.. (She is a twist in the tale of a horror flick Like an erupted volcano, she shook my heart.) really prove it as a bitten love.. Top marks again...10+++
Thank you my friend Vipins for a nice comment on the poem ๐๐๐๐
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love bites, love hurts, but also without love we cannot live and progress. Both poems are written well, for such heartache you must have felt...
Thank you you Jacqueline Broad for such a beautiful comment on the poem ๐๐๐๐