Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 371,641 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Love The Poor - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Lead the line and show the way
over all gesture for their comfortable stay
Voice against their suppression of rights
Element of humanity is to be shown with delight

Today may not be their favorable day
They might have been deprived and pushed away
Yet they are human being and deserve good treatment
Any kind of ill treatment may invite adverse comment

Our hearts may sing for their cause
Efforts must be on because
They may not ask for their up liftment
We got to make the sincere movement

Poverty is real curse
No one in fact deserves
It has to be temporary phase
Person should be helped in any case

Poverty must be wiped out
Over all rehabilitation must be talked about
Oral promises must be done away
Some concrete suggestions must find the way

Food and shelter is the first priority
It is beyond their power and capacity
Let us have some honorable approach
Where by they can live peacefully as such

Help the poor to live with peace
Education and other things can be made at ease
At least some basic education to their children
The human misery then can be overtaken

Comments about Love The Poor by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    Well spoken, dear humanitarian!

    Tara Lev46 minutes ago
    Excellent subject and content, maybe tiny revision would make it perfect! !
    Comment +1
    I love it!

    Ais Pinay48 minutes ago
    Inspiring! to do things even in small portion to mitigate poverty..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2013 4:55:00 AM)

    Re: Love the poor (Score: 1)
    by TygerTyger
    A really great poem. I feel the same way too. and give to the poor. Sometimes, I feel so guilty for having so much. We should never become complacent to think, their shoes couldn't fit our feet someday. You have a good heart my friend. A 10 and a heart. best wishes. Pete.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2012 5:37:00 PM)

    Great Message

    Maxie SuttonLess than a minute ago
    thoughtful, and expressive
    Comment +1
    love it, great message and i cannot agree more
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2012 5:37:00 PM)

    Peter Gibson6 minutes ago
    love it, great message and i cannot agree more
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2012 5:24:00 PM)

    Lead the line and show the way
    Over all gesture for their comfortable say
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 10, 2013

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