Love To Whisper Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love To Whisper

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If you can lend me your ears
Listen carefully and hear
I would love to whisper
Gently for no other listener

I was in confusion
With so many questions
How to put and present?
Exactly same way I felt

Not swords along can win
Not words alone can adore the scene
I have experienced it since
I want no words to mince

It reveals no secret
Yes bit makes it to let
My love for you has remained unknown
I want it to happen

I visit barren land
And find flowers at dead end
But that too look friendly
As if to show love readily

I have only one desire
To speak you very clear
That I need your support
To anchor at the safe port

That shall give friendship call
It will demolish unfriendly wall
I shall be called one of the luckiest
Ever known to any one as closest

Wednesday, August 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Very well said, friendship wall can demolish the unfriendly wall....Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

A decent poem Gareth Jones3 minutes ago But there a few wording errors, but certainly a good flow and meaning. Comment +1 Hidden feelings

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

Jenepher Lane3 minutes ago This writer seems to have hidden feelings for someone. I like his perspective. I hope that someday he can tell the person he feels this way about.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

Debra DeBauche Stewart likes this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2013

f you can lend me your ears Listen carefully and hear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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