'..Love You Too..' Poem by BHUPINDER INDER

'..Love You Too..'

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We met each other by chance
Moreover, decided to be friends
When we spent every minute together
We have to know more better each other
Days, weeks and months passed
And our friendship grew and grew
Then a day came in between
When you had tell me something
Something I had already knew
You took my hand in your hand
And looked deep with love in my eyes
Some thing enter in our body
We never felt like before
You said being friend was great
However, the feeling we felt
Was something more for both?
You placed 'something' on my hand
This was cover with a red band
In this 'something' was your part
I read the words written on it
It filled my eyes with tears
Moreover, my heart filled with joy and love
Joy and love because
You faith me honestly
You wiped my tears
And treated me as a mother
I smiled and you embraced me
And softly whispered the words
'I love you too'

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Copyright 2006 Bhupinder Pant

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 01 April 2006

Very touching poem, Bhupinder, Keep up the good work. Regards, Sandra Fowler

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Chonah Hima'yab 06 April 2006

Hello Bhups, Your poems is so great as you are, it is very meaningful and fruitful message to enlighten the mind of the readers like me. salamat your friend chonah2003@yahoo.com

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Sumita Datta 08 November 2008

very beautifully expressed... I feel like reciting it again and again...

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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2008

a very nice poem full of sentiments and love for your near and dear ones. well done. keep it up.

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Meron Seyoum 02 June 2008

its really nice poem i do really love it

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Malini Kadir 18 April 2007

young heart's first experience......good way of expressing ....keep going!

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Madhu Kamble 15 April 2007

Hi bachha, I read ur peom and no doubt that its amazing...cos u and ur thoughts, ur feelings are something like a true things in this world. Since i know you very well as a best and best friend, I really expect from you this kind of peom's. So, go on and go on writing dear and i will be waiting for your next one...... Your this peom truly touched bottom of my heart.....m your the biggest fan in this world, so keep on writing and ill keep on reading...... Your, Ture Friend, Madhu

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