Thinking About Beautiful Dream Poem by BHUPINDER INDER

Thinking About Beautiful Dream

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If I am not in your life, do not mind
However, I will come in your dreams every night
Every night I will come and sit, in front of you
Touching you and feeling your soft breaths
Hold your hand and looking into your lake eyes
You are singing and I am listening your sweet voice
My head on your sky laps
You rolling your fingers into my hairs
You dropping your love on me as a rain
Moreover, I play with like a little kid games
And the time is come.......
The moon completed his journey
Stars are going his home
We waked up and came out of the dreams
Here we saw beautiful morning scene
Sun is red and bright birds are singing
Cold polite wind flow, flowers are laughing
Moreover, we both are thinking
About this beautiful dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madhu Kamble 18 April 2007

Dear.... My comments for u are more precious. I would only say that your dreams really come true. Touch wood. What ever u dream, those dreams the next day get in your life. I really loved your peoms, as u know m your big fan so for me every letter, every word, every sentence, every paragraph, in your peoms are something touched to my heart..........I olve you my dear friend......n now you know which next peom m waiting for...........so please.........write soon......... Your friend, Madhu

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Bhupinder Pant 02 July 2015

thanks....

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Colin Jeffery 20 November 2008

Such a good poem on so many levels

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Bhupinder Inder 21 May 2018

Thanks Colin... :)

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Seema Aarella 20 November 2008

A beautiful dream indeed, splendid undisturbed and a long dreamy slumber gently opens its eye to a wonderful day....all vey nicely said!

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Bhupinder Pant 02 July 2015

thanks dear...

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Anjali Sinha 08 November 2008

wow --- a beautiful piece anju

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Sumita Datta 08 November 2008

True, DREAM has No bar…. No conditions… No interference... You can always dream whatever you want.... None can stop you there... well expressed poem....

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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2008

very nice flow is present in your poem. enjoyed reading it. welcome to poemhunter.

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Bhupinder Pant 02 July 2015

hi thanks seema...

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