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Thinking About Beautiful Dream - Poem by BHUPINDER INDER

If I am not in your life, do not mind
However, I will come in your dreams every night
Every night I will come and sit, in front of you
Touching you and feeling your soft breaths
Hold your hand and looking into your lake eyes
You are singing and I am listening your sweet voice
My head on your sky laps
You rolling your fingers into my hairs
You dropping your love on me as a rain
Moreover, I play with like a little kid games
And the time is come.......
The moon completed his journey
Stars are going his home
We waked up and came out of the dreams
Here we saw beautiful morning scene
Sun is red and bright birds are singing
Cold polite wind flow, flowers are laughing
Moreover, we both are thinking
About this beautiful dream

Comments about Thinking About Beautiful Dream by BHUPINDER INDER

  • (11/20/2008 2:51:00 PM)

    Such a good poem on so many levels (Report) Reply

    (5/21/2018 7:28:00 AM)

    Thanks Colin... :)

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  • (11/20/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    A beautiful dream indeed, splendid undisturbed and a long dreamy slumber gently opens its eye to a wonderful day....all vey nicely said! (Report) Reply

    Bhupinder Pant (7/2/2015 5:12:00 AM)

    thanks dear...

  • (11/8/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    wow --- a beautiful piece
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    Bhupinder Pant (2/10/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    many many thanks dear for your nice comments your comments increasing me.....

  • (11/8/2008 4:14:00 AM)

    True, DREAM has No bar…. No conditions… No interference... You can always dream whatever you want.... None can stop you there... well expressed poem.... (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2008 2:40:00 AM)

    very nice flow is present in your poem. enjoyed reading it. welcome to poemhunter. (Report) Reply

    Bhupinder Pant (7/2/2015 5:13:00 AM)

    hi thanks seema...

  • (11/8/2008 2:23:00 AM)

    lovely poem, it transcends beyonds and acts a balm soothes well..
    keep writing........ rgrds/salu
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  • (4/18/2007 2:37:00 AM)


    My comments for u are more precious. I would only say that your dreams really come true. Touch wood. What ever u dream, those dreams the next day get in your life. I really loved your peoms, as u know m your big fan so for me every letter, every word, every sentence, every paragraph, in your peoms are something touched to my heart..........I olve you my dear friend......n now you know which next peom m waiting please.........write soon.........

    Your friend,
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    Bhupinder Pant (7/2/2015 5:13:00 AM)


  • (4/6/2006 5:48:00 AM)

    A wonderful dream, thanks for sharing.

    Patricia Gale
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    Bhupinder Pant (2/10/2015 10:47:00 AM)

    many many thanks dear for your nice comments your comments increasing me....

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 6, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 10, 2010

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