Lovely Moonlight. Poem by Fay Slimm

Lovely Moonlight.

Rating: 5.0


Droplets of utter delight
Adorn the fall of moonlight.

Soundless, pale allure splashes
Beams over trees, lattices
All the night-time scenery,
And envelopes even me.

Oh clair de la lovely moon,
Shine his way here to me soon.

Light our feathered bed, do stay
Hiding us, 'til break of day.
My secret love and I need
Your faint clandestine intrigue.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 17 October 2009

moonlight sounds so mysterious 10 fay

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 October 2009

Hey Fay. This is such a beautiful poem. You use the kinda of words that keep the reader spellbound to your poems.. Very lovely to read...10++ lovesss Shan

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Georgia Girl 19 October 2009

such gorgeous imagery, I LOVE the glow of the full moon on the earth and grass and everything...beautiful write Fay...10

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Janell Cressman 31 October 2009

wow amazing poem! ! ! !

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

This is charming and you've captured the allure and twinkle of the moon I think..(smile)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 October 2009

fine wording! awesome poem! 10+

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Sandra Fowler 24 October 2009

The moon, like snow, touches a landcape with glamour. You have captured the magic in this beautiful lyric. I like what you see through the ageless panes of your soul.10+++. Love. Sandra

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I was drawn into the moon's pull with its, could I dare to say a wee bit of seduction. Beautifully written Fay......10 Karin

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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