Lovely Ripples Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

Lovely Ripples

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Gentle breeze creates
Lovely ripples in my mind,
I become extremely pleased,
But suddenly I hear a loud cry,
Which spoils my joy and delight.
I try to find out the source of this harsh cry,
After a thorough search, I discover that
It's coming from a little obnoxious patch of my inner realm.

Tuesday, September 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2019

The first three lines speak of your joy followed by your instant sadness..then an analysis of your psyche! Though the poem is very short, you have provided enough substances for your readers to comprehend! A wonderful poem....10

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