Tuesday, September 17, 2019

Lovely Ripples Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gentle breeze creates
Lovely ripples in my mind,
I become extremely pleased,
But suddenly I hear a loud cry,
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 September 2019

The first three lines speak of your joy followed by your instant sadness..then an analysis of your psyche! Though the poem is very short, you have provided enough substances for your readers to comprehend! A wonderful poem....10

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