Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Lovely Shelter - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“Mom, you are one of the best and beautiful women”
My entry in this home might be good omen
I am so lucky to have you as wonderful mother
Who else can take your place in any way either?

I loved the way you manage complete affair
Right form domestic help to all places and very fair
How could you do it in extra ordinary way?
Emotionally attached through out and not going away

What an elegant look and gorgeous personality you are!
I shall never think of or even have little idea of going far
You provided all of us a shed under the tree
We have grown up in all the respects to be fair and free

I find whole of world in your eyes
It has never occurred in mind to ask why?
I tried to find some flaws in your movement
But no where I could found the place to resent

You are both intelligent and kind
You are strict too and not averse or blind
You take us to task for silly mistakes
We never come to you with any of the complaint or takes

I feel overwhelmed with your presence
That may be reason with divine essence
You are to me precious thing in world
Your slight absence sends me shiver with cold

I find whole world’s comfort
When I come near to you and report
I swim into another world with relief
When you move hand and murmur little or brief

I shall never be ashamed to be called your daughter
“Your mom is so beautiful” I hear this and burst into laughter
What else in family we are seeking after?
Your presence, affection and lovely shelter


Comments about Lovely Shelter by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/14/2011 2:32:00 AM)


    Sreedharan Parokode the very first 4 lines caught me..congrats.
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  • (12/14/2011 1:42:00 AM)


    beautiful work as always (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2011



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