Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 398,644 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Lovely Sweet Home - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It was my dream and lovely sweet home
But she was not to be stepped in and welcome
I have deep anguish and burning heart
At certain times I had to take decision and part

She always remained at center of heart
Yet it was painful decision to depart
No one would have thought of it in life time
Still it took place in our life leading to biggest crime

I remember the promises we exchanged
Stars counted and pleasantries shared
Moon was not that beautiful as she sat near by
Heaven was besides me and got it without any try

I sunk more into deep memory
It had nothing but to add more worry
There was no reason to feel sorry
Yet I was left with single task to carry

She would hold my hand and reiterate
Smile with bright shine and state
“I shall never desert” and always be yours
She may wink the eyes and pleasantly assure

I was flying high with all golden dreams
We were paired heavenly as team
All happy moments and no more concerns
All of sudden it took ugly turns

Neither was it sudden heavy rain
Nor severe earth quake in chains
It was blow caused from plain distrust
Caused by altercation and unwanted thrust

She would boost from beauty point of view
No doubt she deserved all attention and was due
Bu there was limit to cause a pain on that count
Some pressure was building up or was about to mount

There is no more cordial relation
“Break up is call” and given clear indication
Soon I would be on way out of my own
The patch up drive has failed and made known

I miss all those happy moments
There is no more reason to resent
I believe it could have been avoided
The rail could not have been at all collided

Destiny might have something to offer
Separate ways to live and silently differ
I shall never seek and run after
You may now never burst into laughter

I look around and see no one hears
Eyes become watery and I weep the tears
I feel shame and shake the head with fear
I have lost the right now to address her as dear


Comments about Lovely Sweet Home by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/25/2011 7:00:00 AM)


    A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us.

    E.K.L.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/25/2011 1:33:00 AM)


    Sonu Sonal
    Poignant write..Distrust leads to all miseries, poet's conscience speaks it all..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/24/2011 10:52:00 PM)


    I look around and see no one hears
    Eyes become watery and I weep the tears
    I feel shame and shake the head with fear
    I have lost the right now to address her as dear
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 24, 2011



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