Loves Biggest Critic Poem by Ace Of Black Hearts

Loves Biggest Critic



It's so scripted.
I can't help it if I sound like the worlds biggest critic.
A cynic.
A question mark upon the pages of time.
Tell me now can you meet me eye to eye?
Come on lets together put our hands in the fire.
Does the heat make you cringe.
I've always been ready and waiting.
Time to stand up.
Time to leave your mark.
No matter how small it might be.
It doesn't matter as long as it is honest.
Don't ever lie to me.
Not today or tomorrow night.
Trust is the very foundation of what is right.
If you can't handle it, please do get out of the light.
Because only angels can shine at least in my eyes.
Opening the book of secrets.
Please do read it from the front to back.
Exploring the memories of my mind.
Tell me can you feel them?
Are they hovering all around you?
How can it be anything but pure emotion?
Pure devotion.
A passion that is anything but void.
A ghost of love always comes riding in on its great white steed.
It still gallops at the same speed.
Not too fast, not slow.
The perfect written flow.
It echos.
At a hearts faster and faster beat.
Soon the butterflies do retreat.
The awkward becomes so comfortable.
Suddenly we are connected.
It is as if we are one.
In sync even in the way we breath.
And in this moment.
And in this moment.
Is nothing but pure ecstasy.
Because you made me finally believe.
In anything.
Nothing is impossible as long I'm with you.

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