Loves Secret Code Poem by Biff McGuire

Loves Secret Code

Rating: 5.0


How do I find that special key?
To the side of you I most long to see?
Is it cut from a metal known only by few?
On a die that the gods made especially for you?

Is it set with a timer I can't figure out?
With a labyrinth hiding the simplest route.
Through your eyes, I see that side of you
and feel that I want to be part of it to.

Is it only from me, that it hides and eludes?
or have other men witnessed mysterious moods
Like a heart that is happy, when taking a chance,
then walking away and refusing the dance.

Avoiding to long; all the needs and desire,
and dousing the embers, extinguish the fire

Wednesday, June 22, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: moods
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Composed well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A dream of the judgement day' on page 1. Akmal

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Biff McGuire

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Salt lake City, Utah U.S.A
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