Lovesong Poem by XxAmieLee xX
Lovesong
Why it is that every time I fall in love,
it always falls apart,
I sometimes think that I got it all wrong,
right back from the start.
Why is it that every time I fall in love,
he always leaves me sad,
he tells me he just wants to be friends,
it makes me feel so bad.
Why is it that every time I fall in love,
although it's all gone wrong,
I always tell myself,
this is like a stupid lovesong.
Sweet girl - anyone who writes poetry like you deserves better. He's there. You just need to be patient and he'll appear out of the ether and kneel at your feet. I like this one. You have a romantic bent which is very attractive. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
May be you haven't hit the right note yet Amie - look out when you do!
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5/5/2024 7:33:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This oneis easy to grade because I relate to the feelings but I also recognize that this one has a poor ending as well. It wasn't great really at any point but the ending needs work. So, I'll give it a 6. I hope it will get better. GW62