Loving, And So Living... Poem by muthu veerappan

Loving, And So Living...

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I needed you, came into you,
did have a hold on you,
was around you relishing
each of your movements,
cherished you a lot...

In your place, i felt for sure,
that you were mine..

thought of taking you
away to mine...

but when i did, you eluded from me,
i was brain-stormed..
what made you leave me!

it was then i realised,
the liberty i gave you,
in the name of holes,
made you do so..

This is the way the life is,
when a net is inside the water, and
when it is out of the water..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anu Pama 07 April 2009

lovely expressions here......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 February 2009

Love is a way of life...........our ways of life! ! Good works Muthu.

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Awesome lines. I love it so soft and sweet Krista

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

beautiful lines here...expressively written...10

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Joseph Poewhit 06 February 2009

Again the fires of love build on the wood pile

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