Blue city swimming in irreproachable dreams,
Walking in the nighttime rain,
No despair on midnight streets,
No judgment calls on drunks vomiting
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What a fantastic concept and it reminded me of the Mona Lisa with a not invisible for the hint of a smile. A highly original poem with vivid street imagery. 10 love Karin
Night music. There should be a sax playing in the background. Very profound use of the color blue to describe your city.10/10. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
Live & Let Live...graphically depicted...Inventive title to boot, my friend...Rock Solid Penning, as always... FjR
Ammmazing sacred feelings word to word verse to verse! excellent imageries! 10+