Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Loving Everything Like Mother Teresa Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blue city swimming in irreproachable dreams,
Walking in the nighttime rain,
No despair on midnight streets,
No judgment calls on drunks vomiting
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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

Ammmazing sacred feelings word to word verse to verse! excellent imageries! 10+

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What a fantastic concept and it reminded me of the Mona Lisa with a not invisible for the hint of a smile. A highly original poem with vivid street imagery. 10 love Karin

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Sandra Fowler 27 August 2009

Night music. There should be a sax playing in the background. Very profound use of the color blue to describe your city.10/10. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 August 2009

Live & Let Live...graphically depicted...Inventive title to boot, my friend...Rock Solid Penning, as always... FjR

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