Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Loving Is The Only Heaven Comments

Rating: 5.0

You pad across
the white tile floor

almost animal
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 24 April 2008

Tender heaven inspired with an earth touch...heaven translated into earth words!

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Dee Dee Wright 22 April 2008

This is really beautiful and tender. I love the way the ideas keep on morphing from one concept to another...from the feline graceful beautiful animal to the idea of an angel and then as if she were a real angel...a very elegant parabola of thought. I love the title in itself and how it hits home in the last line. Love also the notion of her beauty being something only she could tame. Great poem...really love it.

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Original Unknown Girl 22 April 2008

Oh Donall, I soo know this to be true. Such a beautiful tender poem. HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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