You pad across
the white tile floor
almost animal
...
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This is really beautiful and tender. I love the way the ideas keep on morphing from one concept to another...from the feline graceful beautiful animal to the idea of an angel and then as if she were a real angel...a very elegant parabola of thought. I love the title in itself and how it hits home in the last line. Love also the notion of her beauty being something only she could tame. Great poem...really love it.
Oh Donall, I soo know this to be true. Such a beautiful tender poem. HG: -) xx
Tender heaven inspired with an earth touch...heaven translated into earth words!