Loving you is watching
The sun dance on water
Like endless acres of diamonds
On a golden summer morning.
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This is absolutely magnificent, it should be a song. Could almost make one willing to take a chance on love yet again.~~~~marci. :)
Very sweet...I like it. You named so many things that people over look... the sun on the water...the first snow... great poem....10 Claude
This is awesome! It makes you think about what love is really supposed to be like. -Storm
" Loving you is standing; In the middle of a sun shower, Arms outstretched." A powerful image! I like the 4 line to 3 line changing structure.