Sunday, February 11, 2007

Loving You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Loving you is watching
The sun dance on water
Like endless acres of diamonds
On a golden summer morning.
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Linda Batchelder
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Jamie Stevenson 04 September 2020

" Loving you is standing; In the middle of a sun shower, Arms outstretched." A powerful image! I like the 4 line to 3 line changing structure.

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Marci Made 20 June 2007

This is absolutely magnificent, it should be a song. Could almost make one willing to take a chance on love yet again.~~~~marci. :)

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Geoff Warden 11 February 2007

Very nicely put! ! a ten for this devotional piece

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Claude Davis III 11 February 2007

Very sweet...I like it. You named so many things that people over look... the sun on the water...the first snow... great poem....10 Claude

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Roger Bowman 11 February 2007

I agree with Storm Take care Linda Roger

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Violet Llewellyn 11 February 2007

This is awesome! It makes you think about what love is really supposed to be like. -Storm

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Linda Batchelder

Linda Batchelder

Trenton, Ontario Canada
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