Joseph Narusiewicz

Gold Star - 6,521 Points (9/29/50 / So St Paul, Minnesota)

Lucille - Poem by Joseph Narusiewicz

Lucille as illusive as a rare diamond
Her beauty royal, like a star
Mystical with ethereal eyes
Quick with honesty like Eden
I follow the Star of David
Her gates are golden pain
Unresolved

Kafka and castles
Mothers of steel codependency
Men under mothers like little boys
Rich men with good jobs but boys
Lucille the realist
She waits for a love over the Red Sea
I tell her, I love you Lucille!

I get a text, PROVE IT!

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Lucille by Joseph Narusiewicz

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/29/2015 5:15:00 PM)


    Her beauty is royal, like a star and this poem of love is very amazing on sharing...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015



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