Lucky Me Poem by Tim Labbe

Lucky Me

Rating: 5.0


During my lonely agony,
Swallowed by the margins,
I screamed in to the void.

Scorned by the glare of dawn,
Damned by every dubious dusk,
Ghetto vacancies discarded me.

Lying down on a filthy doormat
Of a run-down tenement,
I disgorged my gelatinous bile.

Awaiting death, gut clenched,
Winters frigid anger pierced
Through every speck of my body.

Heaving and riving,
My death was imminent.
A pale reaper watched.

I sweated out another lucky win that night.

But yet, the reaper still
patiently watches.

After-all, my seasons have
waned well beyond obsolescence.

And his harvest awaits me.

Lucky me.

Thursday, November 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,dying,life and death,living
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 13 November 2020

Heaving and riving, My death was imminent. A pale reaper watched. I sweated out another lucky win// beautiful poetic expression

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 November 2020

A well conveyed poem.... Truly heartfelt.......5 stars*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 November 2020

A vivid depiction of death. Deeply poignant. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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