In Beauty Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

In Beauty

Rating: 4.6

In beauty we dwell
Blooming stark from spring,
Who moves with flight,
Seasons the air
In our abode
Concrete as gleam
Novelised with boons
Built in rock-like base
To glow as Eden.
Our hands knitted
With bond fixed glue-like,
Rendered firm as steel.

Close as we nurture
Our hearts ring-mutual,
Like in the garden
To sprout as flowers free
To ascend and sing.
No how the earthquakes,
The volcanoes,
The hurricanes,
The tsunamis,
The forest fire,
Can ever sever
The cord of our love.

Ramesh T A 26 September 2009

Beautiful In Beauty poem about strong love union against odds of Nature!

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Mehreen Mujeeb 26 September 2009

this is lovely, i love it!

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 26 September 2009

I could only say 'Amen' to this lovely poem. If only all marriage could commit to this idea, there'll be peace on earth, coz family is the core-cell of the society. Tks for share

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Langelihle Maphumulo 26 September 2009

Greetings Obinna, Your poem is very deep i must say, Deeper than any i have read since i joined the website(Which was just three days ago) , Nevertheless i do like the grammar and format, i might have to read over and over again to capture the entire poem...

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Sarah Franks 26 September 2009

Ah Afternoon Adinna, a very deep relationship poem. the ending of the poem, it Amazing and beauty it has and touching words. very deep it is. Please keep up the work

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Bernard Snyder 29 September 2015

I must say this is very different, yet just as beautiful. Great job!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2015

Novelised with boons! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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Ramesh T A 29 September 2015

Love will surpass all hurdles when it blooms strong!

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Ovi Odiete 29 September 2015

This is a beautiful poem about Love..

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 September 2015

Nicely done. Love will exist for ever.

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