Lucky Star Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Lucky Star



An elegant woman in a long brown tube dress
Accenting bare milky shoulders
Gently clad by a silk cape
Exhaling skyscraper-like confidence
Leaned upon the afternoon bar
Requesting Tanqueray and tonic
And placing her dark sunglasses
Into her expensive leather purse.

I was a young man a day
Past twenty-one
And nearly as inexperienced
And naïve as I am today
Decades later;
I entered the bar for no purpose
Dreaming of Ernest Hemingway.

She sat alone at the bar
Not in need of any man
Or anything much in particular;
I sat conspicuously by myself
With a notebook
And studied her ankle-revealing shoes
As if to gather major information
Concerning the universe.

Madonna was playing in the background
And it felt like a pleasant day;
After she finished her drink,
The startlingly beautiful woman
Walked over to my table and asked,
“Are you looking at something?
You seem to be staring at me.”

I replied, “Only at your ankles, honest.”

Before I could utter an apology,
She kissed me and exited the bar.

I almost left my notebook behind
On that amazing day
And still haven’t caught my breath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 24 April 2010

Great atmosphere in this one. Worthy of a Hemingway novel. Fantastic conclusion. Always your friend, Sandra

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