Lust Poem by Lovely No One

Lust

Rating: 4.5


Lust, her eyes shining bright with tears..
Bringing over.. She lets herself fall..
Down into a sea of darkness..
Will she ever be free..?
Every mans desire..
Every mans dream..
Is she stuck to live this life..?
Lust.. Her wrist
They bleed..
Numbing the pain
Every mans desire..
She crys out..
Her heart burns for a touch..
Will she ever feel?
Lust.. Everything red with blood
Will she ever be free from this life of adultery?
Will I ever be free?

(June 17,2012..9: 54)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 15 August 2015

Lovely piece of poetry depicting vain glorification of beauty; the raging fire of lust; the consequent suffering and pain. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Seale 04 August 2012

Of course, as a guy, I had to start with this one! Very powerful write. You have much to say in this... even between the lines. Very discreptive and raw. Great Ink! ! ! -Kelly.

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Godfrey Morris 20 June 2012

Lustful burning with vigour

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