Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Madam Dinky Comments

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MADAM dinky flips her little pinky,
at the clouds and sun, and trees,
with a hohum burst, she spits in the
dirt, then waits for her beatiful king.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

nice theme David, I love it

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Goldy Locks 09 May 2006

good stuff- this one read like a lyrical (more mature) nursery rhyme. who is this Madam dinky- the Spirit in the Sky? (Beatles) best care, Sus.

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Duncan Wyllie 09 May 2006

There are those that can capture the feeling beyond the words, you are one of them, a great write, Love Duncan

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