Magnet And Metal Poem by Lycko Chizo

Magnet And Metal

Rating: 5.0


A strong magnet you are
And I'm a weak metal
Between us there's an energy
Force of your gravity
It pulls me over
Can't resist your power
So I just let you pull me through
Cause I really wanted you to
As I'm approaching you
I get weaker and weaker
Then with a blink of an eye, we're so close together
Now we're attached
But suddenly you tear me apart
You move me away
Don't anymore want me to stay
Then I promise I'll never be magnetified by you again
But here I am going back to you regardless the pain
Cause you are a strong magnet
And I am a weak metal
That to you, I will always be attracted
Even again and again you break my heart into million pieces

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hiding Nothing 24 July 2009

this poem is okay but you need to work on your phrasing a few of the lines don't make sense

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Chloe Young 23 July 2009

ahh, good metaphor for love that you can't keep from. good poem, keep writing <3 10

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