Sinking In Sadness Poem by Lycko Chizo

Sinking In Sadness

Rating: 5.0


Future so unsure,
Tommorow full of sorrow;
The sun won't shine,
The end of time;
Overwhelming pain,
All things in vain;
Darkness persist,
Hope had been deceased;
Nothing to feel,
Wound won't heal;
Rain is pouring,
Heart is bleeding;
Life's closure,
Death's pressure;
Glass are broken,
Can't be put back again;
Loneliness' power,
I losed over;
No more light,
To guide my sight;
Blown away happiness,
Reign of pure sadness;
Nobody is around,
All alone on the ground;
Too tired to cry,
Eyes already dried;
Life can't be sweeter,
I tasted it - it's bitter;
Everything is so wrong,
Can't anymore be strong;
You must stand beside me,
But you turn away;
Now there's nothing left,
I am about to melt;
I have nothing but gloom,
Here inside my tomb.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Callie Valentine 25 July 2009

That's exactly how I feel right now.. wow, so amazingly well written. This is an incredible poem, definitely a 10.

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Rhonda Moody 25 July 2009

I know where your coming from Lycko. Been there too. God was my light and now I can see. If you read my poem looking from the inside out.. Im sure you will relate to that.. good write. keep getting your words our on paper, they are beautiful and it helps you as well. I give you a 10

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that was a really sad poem it almost made me cry. you wrote from the heart and i like that. there should be no secerts when it comes to poetry. i really loved your poem. i'll give it a 10+

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