Guess Who


Make A Move Before I Make Mine - Poem by Guess Who

In this part of the story
I'm the only one falling in love with your beauty
I go from not loving to loving you
From running from you to waiting for you
Too bad you aren't understanding my feeling
To make it mutual I'm still trying
I the only Guess-who
Trying to win your heart
With the love dart ;)
Maybe i would leave you lonely
If you don't make a move as early
So i am sorry if that happens

Tonight look high in the sky
In the stars you'll see i would cry
When you pass me by
Without telling me ' Hi '
Then you would lie
And think if what i said was truth or lie
Then you would understand my feeling
You are the one I'm still loving
So make a move
Before i make mine

Look at the bright sun
Then you will remember me


Comments about Make A Move Before I Make Mine by Guess Who

  • Unwritten Soul (3/7/2013 11:27:00 AM)


    I feel so much emotions in this poem, such a heavy one..but read it make smile a lighter one to be done on my face, you are very talented writer GWho! _Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Darkangel Flyfree (2/25/2013 8:27:00 AM)


    Nice poem...you are amazing with your words as usual! :) (Report) Reply

  • Vivek Tiwari (2/9/2013 12:18:00 PM)


    Move from both the sides will help a easy each. Hope a true happening of the line All's well that ends well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 9, 2013


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