Make It Real Poem by marwin danao

Make It Real

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Don't tease me with your stare
It felt like I've got a Sunday punch
You mesmerized me, what a scare
When someone gave you a flower bunch

You're like a bluebird in the spring
I love the way the song you sing
Your amazing charismatic glamorous being
is the only incomparable thing for seeing

Personifying the morning with gloom of roses
and full of butterflies on petals they blink
Can hear them singing without their voices
Could turn the grass from green to pink

As an angel that touched the ground
dancing with endless lovely sound
While sailing on the wings of clouds
and sent me to a place only you and I allowed

You gave hope to my empty heart
and brought melody to my unpitched life
This moment is the love of art
There's nothing nor no one for us to strife

I don't want to end this feeling
and make hopes for those believing
But Sunday morning my name they scream
I opened my eyes and realized it's only a dream

Tuesday, October 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 November 2018

dreams- -they torment and they give us wings- -well written- -looking forward to more from you

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Chinedu Dike 27 September 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Analiza Nabor 16 December 2018

woooooow kuya! ! ! ! ! Hirap magrhyming ee HAHAH

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Joan Tayaban 09 December 2018

Yieee, ang galing mo talaga kuyaaa! may rhymes pa: D

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Marwin Danao. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Susan Williams 12 November 2018

come to read another poem by you- -but alas there is no new one- -get that pen to penning, my friend! ! !

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marwin danao

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Pasay City, Philippines
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