there's a man
on a train
with his head
in his hands
I'm three seats behind
a man
on the train
with my head
in my hands
A wonderful write with a captivating title. Simple yet thought provoking. Cleverly written.
Hi, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem Man On A Train. I wrote of a man with his head in his hands and later we see the man is me - the abstract metaphor of being sat three seats behind suggests a disconnect and a struggle to keep up (with life) hence being sat with head in hands.
Thanks for commenting on my poem Man On A Train, much appreciated., .,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem of mine is also on Write Out Loud here's a comment from that poetry website about my poem Man On A Train " This is absolutely brilliant Clive so much emotion in so few lines"
more comments for this poem from Write Out Loud: " Really clever, short simple but saying so much." " Certainly eye-catching in its content - creating a range of reactions (and questions?) in the reader's mind."
Another comment left for this poem on Write Out Loud: " One of the finest pieces of poetry I've read in a while. So concise yet so powerful! "