there's a man
on a train
with his head
in his hands
I'm three seats behind
on the train
with my head
in my hands
this poem of mine is also on Write Out Loud
here's a comment from that poetry website about my poem Man On A Train
" This is absolutely brilliant Clive so much emotion in so few lines"
more comments for this poem from Write Out Loud:
" Really clever, short simple but saying so much."
" Certainly eye-catching in its content - creating a range of reactions
(and questions?) in the reader's mind."
Another comment left for this poem on Write Out Loud:
" One of the finest pieces of poetry I've read in a while. So concise yet so powerful! "
A wonderful write with a
Simple yet thought provoking.
Hi, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem Man On A Train. I wrote of a man with his head in his hands and later we see the man is me - the abstract metaphor of being sat three seats behind suggests a disconnect and a struggle to keep up (with life) hence being sat with head in hands.
Thanks for commenting on my poem Man On A Train, much appreciated., .,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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