Friday, June 1, 2012

Many Incidents Intended Comments

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Many incidents intended,
Has evidence as incentive.
But no one pays attention...
Or listens to what's being said,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Heather Wilson 02 June 2012

I found this clever in its simplicity, the further I read getting the message. nice one.

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

wonderful repetition making this good poem to be a real message....

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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