Allan James Saywell

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Marriage - Poem by Allan James Saywell

In a perfect marriage
Within a bad relationship
A free spirit
Can become a trapped animal
Your world can become a cage

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Comments about Marriage by Allan James Saywell

  • Paul Warren (11/19/2015 2:58:00 PM)

    Marriage can be this way with the wrong partner (Report) Reply

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  • Shakil Ahmed (11/19/2015 8:05:00 AM)

    yes, marriage makes ones life trapped or caged, we lose our free will in certain cases yet surrendering one's will to others whim is also enjoyable, wel l penned poem thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2015 7:58:00 AM)

    Irrespective of all of it's criticism the institution of marriage thrives, may be to keep society in order and/or for reaping fruits of a meaningful and mutually beneficial relationship.
    A Thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 19, 2015

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