A wind-blown cloak with hat drawn down
nears gauntly, passes, and is gone;
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Your poem has very descriptive action words. I could picture it as a movie.
very nice. I like the imagery and the description of the character in ur poem. ^__^ -Ryu-Oh Kenshin
Hi Michaela, A marvelous poem with a superb choice of vocabulary. The descpriptive qualities are par excellence. Wouls love to read your other works, Welcome, Paul