Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 688,256 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

May Always Stay - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I smiled at little success
I had now fine access
I had struck some fortune
It was good amount and sufficient to the tune

How to term it as gain?
I had not tried it with pain
It came without any worth try
In private I feel very much shy

I failed to realize
When mother was no more to please
She had gone for never to return
I felt sore forever in turn

How can I term it loss?
It was temporary pause
One arrived due to some luck
Another took place as fate was struck

So the life is called strange
To enjoy with happiness and not to avenge
The scares may go away
But bitterness may always stay

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez and Shujat Ahmad like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 6:14:00 AM)

    Very nice poem


    Hassen Gara7 minutes ago
    True words. Feel your poem emanes from a personal experience. Please check out my poem PERSEVERANCE on poetry.com Hassen Gara 520750.Thank you
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    gain and loss!

    KR BALAKRISHNAN14 minutes ago
    Realisation of perpetual happiness is a great quality.The feelings of melancholy, kindness, rapture etc make the minds melt in a furnace and they are transformed into one form coming out as word-crystals in the poem.Good to read and assimilate.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem

    Ellen O'Shea6 minutes ago
    This seems very personal, which in turn makes it relatable to an extent. Thanks for sharing.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 6:11:00 AM)

    Bitterness


    Jayden Koh19 minutes ago
    To enjoy with happiness and not to avenge - nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    good


    nnrsn nnrsn20 minutes ago
    pleasant to read,
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2014 5:34:00 AM)

    I smiled at little success
    I had now fine access
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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 18, 2014



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