Me Poem by Stay out of my life

Me

Rating: 5.0


On the floor they stand around my body
some not even sure that it was me
the hair styled the same
the clothes I put on before everyone came

So why cant they identify me
people standing around asking if that's she
am I that unrecognizable
isnt there anyone here thats capable

Help! Is anybody there
can you find someone who cares
I know Im not dead so why is everyone ignoring me
wait... why is everyone leaving me

I know Im not sleeping
so how could this be
'it's to bad' they said
as they all turned their heads

For no one cared to wake me
since they had all left me be
was this some kind of sick dream
and yet not everything is what it seems

You see, I am here alone
and this is what I've shown
a glimpse a foretaste of reality
because no one sees the real me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Chris 02 April 2013

Hopefully, better times have been found. I recognize this rut as I have dug myself out of similar. -some random guy

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Brian Dorn 12 July 2006

Michelle, vivid scene development and an interesting atmosphere... creative and distinct. Well done! Brian

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